Glad to see more pieces coming together! (I... honestly feel like I still haven't gotten enough of a feel for this story to be able to comment intelligently. :o )
I can say I seriously want the explanation for what the voices in Ed's head are. Those kinds of devices in a story disturb me. :Þ
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Date: 2011-04-24 02:43 am (UTC)I can say I seriously want the explanation for what the voices in Ed's head are. Those kinds of devices in a story disturb me. :Þ