--It's rather painful to see Ed so broken like this - a shadow of what he once was, of what we know him to be.--
Is it bad that this makes me really happy? Because there were times when I was writing this that I wondered if I was properly conveying how awful it is that Ed is in this state. I tried to make it everything I personally wouldn't want to see. Because (hopefully) that makes it that much better when things do finally turn around ;)
--Is Al, either in armor or in the flesh, in this btw?--
Where Al is is the million dollar question here. But, I promise he's not dead, and he *will* be in the story.
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Date: 2011-04-22 12:26 pm (UTC)Is it bad that this makes me really happy? Because there were times when I was writing this that I wondered if I was properly conveying how awful it is that Ed is in this state. I tried to make it everything I personally wouldn't want to see. Because (hopefully) that makes it that much better when things do finally turn around ;)
--Is Al, either in armor or in the flesh, in this btw?--
Where Al is is the million dollar question here. But, I promise he's not dead, and he *will* be in the story.
And, thank you for reading!