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Well, here's one more chapter of this one. Though I feel like it's rather rough at this stage. I've been trying to write this one in a simpler style than the one I've been using for "Miscommunication" in the hopes that it would help me write faster. But, I'm not sure I like it. It almost feels too stripped down. Any comments or criticisms would be welcome.
( The More Things Change, Chapter 2 )
Again, any comments and criticisms would be greatly appreciated. I'm not at all confident in my Sesshoumaru characterization. I feel like he might be behaving in ways that are less true to character and more just a matter of making it easier on me plot-wise. Suggestions to help correct that would be welcome.
( The More Things Change, Chapter 2 )
Again, any comments and criticisms would be greatly appreciated. I'm not at all confident in my Sesshoumaru characterization. I feel like he might be behaving in ways that are less true to character and more just a matter of making it easier on me plot-wise. Suggestions to help correct that would be welcome.
